so last tuesday, we, the Veterans and our fearless Leader Leilani were preparing for the event – Returning Soldiers Speak, where Adam, Eric, myself, and Rick read, & Sue, Sayuri and Richshell came out in support of me.. and to see the event… and many liked my poem, and i may make a new recording of it and post it some time before the year is out… i want to anyway
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so this week, with us was Hugh Martin, a published author of poetry!!! we did our timed writing, and our prompt was selected by Adam Cloys (author and publisher of “Reason” – currently on the Writers Workshop page under programs) so to his prompt i wrote!!! in a 18 minute timed writing (different than our 20 minute writings)
Tuesday, November 12, 2013 @ 13:32:06
After I decided to enlist
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I don’t know if I decided at all
It was the fall of gravity
The taking of the mind from the poverty I straddled
Poverty that kept me from straddling the fairer of my kind
Like earthlings from the raw sense of what life is all about and at what time
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i don’t know if decided at all
or if bullies that I hated had to now wait in line
wait in line for that which was their turn
turn to learn the lessons of their atrocities
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I don’t know if I decided at all
In the fall of knowing that there is this great and glorious call
In a mind untamed but knowing that in democracy and its liberties lie the gains
Gain of the freedoms all have yet to be known
Still in a young nation – has so much room from where it has presently grown
And those still thrown under the bus – and shoved and taken down a notch or two
From the non notch that they were up in the first place
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My mind is gone threw
This contemplation of why it was that I decided to enlist
The minimum 3 year contract
And assurance of 97% that I would be the chef I dreamed of being
That I would cook for my Marines – and in crystal clear fields
They would be seeing
That nobody else was up to die but them
For when and if shit hit that fan
None to ask just where have U been
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So
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I don’t think I decided to enlist
Enlisted I did – in no hand of a draft
Enlisted I did – and too seen the shaft
This green weenie that oft was spoke about
A cook I was not – position oversight to my dream deferred
I too was a grunt, that infantry man, that first to be called
we’re the Marines man!!!
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Devil Dogs, Jar Heads, Leathernecks, Marines
In 2 eyeballs, just what the hell has been seen
In a war time stint – and no hint of the dreams of what one would be
The immediacy of what it is that one is in the present tense
just trying not to be killed
trying not to be killed
as if one had a choice in the matter
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and in non-war time
another dismissal phrase came to mind
just before – shit happens
were they a friend of mine, a friend of yours,
a brother or sister, a cousin, a son or a daughter
does it matter
war or peace
does it change the aforementioned reasons
are they reasons
is there a reason at all
for a time of war
how big or how small
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can U bring then a breath of hope
for why one decides to enlist
to go to college
to make a better opportunity to live
for who to live
to enable oneself the best of potential for their contributions to our world
can they, will they, will I contribute at all
if in that ditch did I fall, on that sand did I crawl, in those jungles did I fall, in that street did I fall
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is it democracy for all
that I decided to enlist
after I decided to enlist
was it in my mind in the shaped experiences – to stop the bullies
before
or after I decided to enlist
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did I change my mind
after I decided to enlist!
also, i have written several poems in the interim, and will post them sometime, there are also 100’s of poems i have written that have never been transcribed!!! i need help